The Chinese Warship – by Angus (aged 11)

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The Children in Extramile Tuition at Ferny Hills are locked in a fierce short story writing competition. The winner wins a HUGE trophy. Help Angus but liking and reblogging. He’ll be very very happy … not unlike his Indian crew, chowing down on chicken in Sumatra

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ship-battleOne night a Chinese war ship was in the South China Sea when suddenly an Indian War ship appeared. The Chinese war ship had big guns on the front and back. The Chinese war ship fired first and the Indian war ship retaliated. The Indian war ship then turned around and left because it was super time. That night the Indian crew ate chicken in Sumatra.

 Angus (aged 11)

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  1. Angus i forgot to answer when i got your story but i re a d it w a iting for the next inst a llment Dr oing well keep trying On 29/10/2016 10:43 AM, “Quills Writing Tuition” wrote:

    > lynettefinch posted: “The Children in Extramile Tuition at Ferny Hills are > locked in a fierce short story writing competition. The winner wins a HUGE > trophy. Help Angus but liking and reblogging. He’ll be very very happy … > not unlike his Indian crew, chowing down on chicken ” >

    • Angus always writes really charming stories about people behaving in peaceful ways, even when they are provoked. He’s a great kid and I hope people are inspired by the lesson in this one. Eating is much, much better than retaliating.

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